Highlight or click a word on the left. Replacements come in three groups: an approved abbreviation, the action-verb list's picks, then the dictionary. Each group is listed shortest first, with the width it adds or saves.

Repeated words, weak openers, bullets with no number, and acronyms on neither list. Click a finding to go to it in the draft.

• No numberline 1Type or paste your bullets here, one per…No number. Impact without a figure reads as opinion.
• Acronymline 2PDF"PDF" is on neither approved list. Spell it out once or check the list.
• No numberline 3A statement that cannot be squeezed onto…No number. Impact without a figure reads as opinion.
• No numberline 4Both boxes are the true width of the blo…No number. Impact without a figure reads as opinion.
• No numberline 5Everything you write is saved in this br…No number. Impact without a figure reads as opinion.

Fluff, vague claims, duty language, number style and readability, each as a question rather than a verdict. A bullet runs from its dash to the next one, so a continuation line is read with the line above it. Suggestions, not policy: dismiss what does not apply. Nothing here rewrites the draft.

• Lowbullet 1is typedPassive voiceMay be passive voice, which hides who acted (a heuristic, not a parse). Consider leading with the member and the action.JumpDismiss
• Lowbullet 2is adjustedPassive voiceMay be passive voice, which hides who acted (a heuristic, not a parse). Consider leading with the member and the action.JumpDismiss
• Lowbullet 5is savedPassive voiceMay be passive voice, which hides who acted (a heuristic, not a parse). Consider leading with the member and the action.JumpDismiss